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Err Iunno xD   I glanced around the small room, sighing as I dropped to the old carpet floor. My sister had just moved out of the house, and her old room was given to me. It was a bland room with tacky, dust covered blinds, white walls, and a cramped closet in the far left corner. There were a few holes in the walls where nails had once been. All my furnature in the room made it seem small, but I liked small.
  "I should've cleaned it a bit better before we moved your stuff in," Mom apologized, throwing her hand on my shoulder. Mom was kindof short, like I, but she had light brown hair instead of my disgusting blonde hair. She had green eyes; I had blu

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idk got bored have this.
based off my dog, so I guess she's a border collie?
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Critique by *christwriter Aug 27, 2010, 4:50:02 PM
Very pretty, very shiny. Good idea. Your color choices are excellent, your accents spot on. There are some structural flaws but you did get your point across. Very techno, very chrome, very cool.

Issues? Issues: mostly anatomy. I understand that it's sonic-style art, and that means a lot of it is exaggerated. But there's a lot of basics that you're not supposed to violate. Her shoulder and boob area looks a little too compressed. I *think* it's because her ribcage is too narrow. There should be a curve right after her boob and it's not there. I cannot figure out WTF is up with her hips. It looks as if her tech suit is shredded at her crotch (which pretty much negates the reason to wear a skin suit) and her left leg is in front ... but you get down to her feet and the right foot is in front. Huh? Hips are also too short. Knees occur in the middle of the leg. If they're not there, the whole leg looks wrong.

Also, arm is too long and she either has no elbows or her arm is hinged above her boobs. Elbows occur at or near the belly button.

Neck up, it's perfect. Neck down, there's issues but, much as I may harp on them, they are not fatal. I'd look at the style of artwork you're imitating and mark out where things like boobs, hips, knees, elbows and such fall, and then try to get the same measurements in your own artwork. Keep up the good work, hon!
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*RobotBunnyInc Aug 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I like it. And shooting down that crit you got:


Sonic artist seem to have more freedom in terms of style, to the point where anatomy and proportion is not an issue. I mean there's a point where the boobs are so big that in the real world the characters would need breast reduction for their aching backs. -w-;;;
For a first time attempt this came out well and I say keep going with what ya got.
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~orangesage Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
kewl! XD
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~Platypus-Fever Aug 27, 2010
THOSE SHOES ARE BALLIN'.
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~JoTehDemonicPickle Aug 27, 2010
SHINY



DO WANT
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Mood: Love ~Tooley64 Aug 27, 2010  Student
thats Awesome!!!! Great job! :la: I bet it took a LOONg time lol
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~RushTheWolf Aug 27, 2010
D'AWHHH SHE'S PURTY
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=johnwatsonblog Aug 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
blaw
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~TeamKarasu Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THE FUCK


-loves forever-



I think it'd look better if her pants weren't ripped at the thigh, but eh. |D I'm not really one with artistic views of awesome. Everything else about her is great, though <3
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=johnwatsonblog Aug 27, 2010  Student Digital Artist
THE FOCK? D':

-loved forever; loves forever back-

yeah, they looked bare though so I was like
WAT ZE FOK, /scribble

sankyuuuuu
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~TeamKarasu Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AHURR <333 -hugs-

Lolol. But yeah, it looks awesome besides that :'D You're welcome.
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